Wednesday 6 May 2015

OUIL 401 End of Module Evaluation

Leeds College of Art
BA (Hons) ILLUSTRATION
Level 04
OUIL401 Context of Practice Credit20
End of Module Self Evaluation
NAME: TILLY BUTTERS

1. What skills have you developed through this module and how effectively do you
think you have applied them?
During this module, I feel I have developed the skills to research a topic thoroughly
in order to extract the important and necessary sections of information. The subject
I studied was so great that it was crucial for me to highlight the important factors,
meaning research was vital. 
Making literature visual was also a skill that i gained from this module, and although 
I feel my visual outcome could have been better, I feel I tackled a difficult subject. I
had to change my ideas quite a few times in order to show what autism was, and
not to show my opinion on the subject, or tell people how to feel about it. This was
extremely difficult for me, however I think the end result is a reflection of what I
learnt.


2. What approaches to/methods of research have you developed and how have
they informed your practical outcomes?
Research was key for me, given that I didn't know anything about autism when I
started. Therefore I tried all methods of research. Books helped with factual
information, often very complex and scientific. Certain websites helped me to
understand an autistic persons point of view, and to empathise, which resulted
impacting my practical outcomes. It was important that I kept the balance between
a factual visual outcome and something I felt strongly about. 
I think my Petcha Kutcha presentation was based on how I felt much more than it
was informative. I took this on board when creating my visual diagram, and tried to
use all sources of information to create a clear diagram of what autism is, rather
than how I felt about it.


3. What strengths can you identify in your work and how have/will you capitalise on
these?
My knowledge on the subject has expanded vastly since the beginning, and I feel
my strengths lie primarily in my research. Making such broad subject into one
visual diagram was also something I feel I did well. Given that the spectrum is so
broad, I really struggled with pin pointing the most important factors and then
turning them into an informative visual diagram. However Im happy with my
outcome, and feel I tackled my problems with this well. 


4. What weaknesses can you identify in your work and how will you address these
in the future?
For me, my weaknesses are mainly in the visual research of my subject. I found it
really challenging to communicate what I knew and understood about autism, in a
way that the viewer would understand. I think i will give careful consideration before
choosing a topic so vast and complex next time, and make sure that I can visually
portray the subject before embarking on a very difficult journey with it. I would also
have liked to explore more methods of image making with this module, which is
something I will definitely do next time. 


5. Identify five things that you feel will benefit you during next years Context of
Practice module?
1. Choosing something a little easier to make into a visual diagram, and
something that isn't so complex and dangerously easy to get wrong. 
2. The ability to translate an essay into a visual diagram on a subject with
such in-depth complexities should definitely help me to communicate
through drawing during the next module.
3. During this years context of practice i felt I had to do a lot of problem
solving in order to get to the end result, therefore tackling complicated
obstacles more effectively will definitely benefit my work next year. 
4. Blogging my research as I go would definitely benefit my research next
time, and perhaps drawing ideas as they come to me, rather than waiting
for the visual task to be set.
5. Petcha Kutcha has given me the confidence to talk passionately about a
subject I feel strongly about, which is definitely something I hope to build
on next year. 



Final piece and evaluation

Here is my final poster!

Im really pleased with the outcome, given how much I struggled with getting my ideas down on paper. This was by far the hardest thing Ive ever tried to communicate though imagery, and i will definitely pay careful consideration when deciding what to do for COP next year. There is far too much to try and communicate in one visual diagram when it comes to autism, but I think I managed to extract the most important factors. 

Things I would do differently next time:

  • Perhaps make the man a little more hand drawn and add more tone, it looks too flat to me. 
  • Made the boxes smaller in the brain so as to fit more information in.
  • Choose an easier subject to illustrate!
On the whole Im happy. I feel I tackled so many problems with this brief, but it was worth it in the end. 


Colour palettes












Thought I'd make a load of variations of the final outcome, just to make sure I got the perfect one. Unfortunately my laptop crashed after I'd made my first final and I had to start over. But in some ways Im glad, as I think these came out much better. 
I like the coloured ones, but I want something that reflects a medical phrenology aesthetic. Therefore the one I'm going for is the bottom middle one. 



Final drawing


Here is my final design! Finally. Needs some touching up on photoshop, and I'll be adding colour digitally too, but this is the one. 
The sections I didn't mention before include:
The music- symbolising creativity again. Often autistic people have something they are amazing at that they tend to find as a release or an escape. 
The bird in the cage- represents the communication difficulties, how they might feel trapped in their own emotions, as in Isabella Arsenaults work. 
The lightbulb is based on something I read from an autistic persons blog. The quote was 'Autism makes things shine for me'
And the other is the shapes- these symbolise the patterns and obsessions that are often found in an autistic persons life. They often get lost in one subject, and find it incredibly interesting/therapeutic. 

Now to add the colour and type and get it finished! 



Ideas.


I thought about having the things that represent autism coming out of the head, however I decided against the idea, as I wanted to keep the poster simplistic and more professional, like a medical phrenology poster.


Therefore i will go with something like this. Still experimenting with what goes where and what to include at the moment. Don't think Ive ever voluntarily given myself something this hard to do!

Problem solving.



These were my initial ideas (before petcha kutcha). During my feedback after the presentation however, it was clear that I needed to change my ideas somewhat. I was trying to shine a positive light on autism, the bird symbolising freedom, acceptance, in a society where perhaps autistic people are marginalised. 
I completely agreed with my feedback though, I needed to hold up a mirror to what autism is, rather than show my thought on the subject.
























After discussing phrenology with Richard, I started to rough some new possible outcomes. I really struggled with what to put in the brain, because autism isn't just one thing with an answer, its a spectrum disorder. In some ways, I wish I'd written about something else, but I guess problem solving is all part of the course!

So far I've got the puzzle to represent the symbol for autism. Paint brushes and pencils to show creativity, physical equations, these are both to show the gifts an autistic person might have. The eye with a cross through it for difficulty with eye contact. Need to work on some more ideas.

Research into Visual Diagram

                                                                        Phrenology





After a quick discussion with Richard about where to take my visual diagram, he advised me to look into phrenology posters. There seems to one for everything! As soon as I looked at a few i knew I wanted to create an illustrated version based on my subject. With this idea in mind, i just needed to come up with what would go in the visual diagram, without being biased or too opinionated. This was always going to be the real challenge.




Luke Ramsey


I looked at Luke Ramsey's piece on 'dystopia' to give myself a little more of an idea as to what would go in the brain. I love his work, and the detailed and complex approach he takes to his illustrations. However I want my diagram to be a clear communication of what autism is, therefore I will keep it slightly more simple than this. But studying his work has helped me understand how to create a visual diagram based on such a pressing matter.  


Monday 4 May 2015

Feedback for presentation


I was happy with the feedback I received, however I now need to reconsider how to approach my visual diagram. I agree with what was said, that I had concentrated too much on shining a positive light on the disorder that I hadn't really put any of the facts in. Im now a little worried about how to do this, but I have a few roughs ready to practice, so hopefully something good will come of them. 





Petcha Kutcha - presentation slides

Slides, in order of presentation.
1.  Introduction, how i got onto the subject and how it turned into 'How illustrators raise awareness for autism'.



2. The book that inspired me and got me interested in the first place. What it taught me initially - Art is a way for autistic people to express how they feel, or its an escape/release.


3. What is autism? A neurological difference. Neural systems tied to gaging social cues appear over-connected in children with the disorder. 

4. Why is awareness of the disorder so important? The rise in numbers over the last 30 odd years of people being diagnosed is so great.

5. Why illustrators to raise awareness? Because autism is a global disorder and art is a universal language.

6. The illustrations I looked at during my essay and how they focused on the negative aspects. Isolation, communication difficulties etc.

7. How my work started to reflect these problems. Very beginning of developing ideas.

8. After reading an autistic persons point of view on eye contact my ideas changed and I decided to focus my work on a more positive side. 

9. It was explained that if they make eye contact they often focus on your face and all the things on your face rather than the words you're saying. So for them not to make eye contact actually makes sense and who are we to say its wrong?

10. At the end of the day we are all different. No two people are the same and we need to start accepting our differences, rather than focusing on all the things that we think are wrong with each other. Need to start focusing on the good things.

11. Take Jake Barnett for example, 16 year old with a master in theoretical physics. He says that 'He's happy to be autistic"

12. Hw was part of a forty day project that ran up to autism awareness day. Autistic people were asked to send in paintings or blog posts and it was an opportunity for them to have a voice and to be heard. 

13.Things like this give autistic people the confidence to speak out in a society where they are often marginalised for their differences. This is Mikey Allcock, and he says that his autism makes things shine'

14. Great things are starting to happen all over the world. This is the chalks art festival that now takes place in America once a year and invited autistic people and their families to join together for the day, get creative and celebrate who they are.

15. Art events like these are taking place all over, this one is called 'Create - art for autism'  and its an amazing way for people on the spectrum to express themselves. We need to start looking for the gifts, rather than the problems...

16. Take Stephen Wiltshire for example, one of the most renowned city scape artists today. He has the gift to look at a city scape just once, come away and then draw it, window for window.

17. My work started to change. Started to focus on celebrating autism, or at least stepping away from focusing on the negativities. 

18. The brain is a map, a journey and to each individual, a different journey. 

19. My ideas for my visual diagram. 

                                                           20. The final rough idea.