Notes after feedback session

The feedback session with Richard was really useful and left me feeling confident about my essay. Apparently with a few revisions my essay could go from good to great, which I didn't expect to hear at all!

What needs to be done in order to improve-

- Add 3 or 4 other quotes  and link these quotes to the first section in order to back up my ideas.

- Work on the conclusion a little more. Address and Answer the question directly.

- Edit the intro, state the aims of the essay.